Saturday, January 7, 2012
The Arcadians #2
Saturday is headache day.
I always seem to get a headache on Saturday. Kind of like a viral hot knife through butter. Know what I mean?
I hope not, 'cause I sure don't.
I should mention that Dani's, "EEEEEEEEEE", was the hardest line that I've ever had to write! She's a headstrong, competent young woman. I just can't see her letting loose with a stereotypically girly, "EEEEEEEEEE!!!" But "AAAAAAHHHHHH" didn't seem right. And she just snapped out of a groggy faint, so it just didn't seem likely for her to formulate, "Foresooth! What strange sight sets before my eyes?" Maybe, "WHAT THE F@#$!?!" But, is that really sitting on her lips as she can barely focus her eyes? If anyone's still reading, maybe you can give me some feedback?
Yeah, sure. Like anybody's still reading!
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2 comments:
yah it does not seem quite rite 4 her..........what about a big gasp in stead? ':/
Darnit! Where were you when I was writing this?!?
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